Here I let you read it and comment what you think!!! (SPOILS I have only written the first part, I should start writing it more !))
(WHEN IT ALL BEGAN)
Girl grabbed the knife, that was resting on the kitchen table. She ran her fingers gently down the blade of the knife and laughed. She was sure that this was her best idea ever. She walked along the lightless hallway towards the white door. She felt cold in her bare toes, and she held the knife tight in her left hand. Her red hair touched the bloody back of the pyjama shirt in the rhythm of her walking. The girl grabbed the handle and pulled it down listening at the same time that her mom won't wake up. She stepped silently in. Her footsteps knocked the wooden floor as she came closer to the sleeping character. When she was next to the bed she held the knife up, she inhaled and exhaled. Soon she self-confidently and furiously hit the big knife into her mom. She woke up and screamed out of the pain. She couldn't realize what happened when the girl hit the knife the second....and the third...and the fourth time until she didn't make a sound anymore. The girl was all covered in the splattered blood. She was breathing heavily and dropped the knife. She started to laught the sickest laughter.She laughed more and more and more and the laughing started to hurt. She began to run, still laughing. She ran outside into the darkness, leaving her dead mother behind....
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